"The universe is made of stories, not of atoms."
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What Makes a Historical Character Unstoppable?

Kirkus Reviews gives Unstoppable: The Victoria Woodhull Story a “Get It” verdict, calling it “a deftly paced and meticulously researched novel” and “a compulsively readable portrait full of rich characterization and well-observed historical detail.”

 

Some of the most compelling stories are hiding in plain sight.

They may be buried in history books, reduced to a footnote, or remembered for a single controversial moment. But occasionally, a writer discovers the person behind the historical record—and realizes there is a much bigger story waiting to be told.

That is what Kate Danaher has done with Unstoppable: The Victoria Woodhull Story, a historical novel about a woman who was decades ahead of her time.

And now, Unstoppable has received a coveted “GET IT” verdict from Kirkus Reviews.

Read the full Kirkus review of Unstoppable

Victoria Woodhull was born into poverty in 19th-century Ohio. She married young, became a mother, educated herself largely through books, and eventually emerged as a financial entrepreneur, advocate for women’s rights, and the first woman to run for president of the United States.

She did this in an era when women couldn’t even vote.

That contradiction alone is remarkable. But for Danaher, Woodhull wasn’t simply a historical symbol. She was a complicated, ambitious, provocative woman with convictions, flaws, relationships, enemies, and enormous dreams.

That distinction matters.

A historical figure becomes a story when we stop looking only at what the person accomplished and start asking who this person was—and what it cost her to pursue what she believed.

Kirkus praised Danaher’s novel for its “rich characterization and well-observed historical detail,” noting that Victoria remains a vibrant presence throughout the book.

That is an important lesson for any writer working with history.

Historical fiction presents a particular challenge.

The writer has an extraordinary amount of material to work with: dates, political events, famous people, social customs, clothing, locations, technology, newspapers, and documented events.

But research alone doesn’t create a compelling narrative.

The story comes from the character moving through that world.

In Unstoppable, Danaher brings 19th-century America to life through details ranging from parlors and steamships to lavish dinners and the social conventions of the period. Kirkus specifically praised the novel’s novelistic rendering of the era.

But those details work because they surround a character who wants something.

Victoria wants a voice.

She wants independence.

She wants women to have a say in the government they help support.

And, ultimately, she wants to challenge a system that has already decided what a woman is allowed to be.

That gives the historical detail dramatic purpose.

One of the most useful questions a writer can ask when developing a story is:

What does my protagonist want that the world says she cannot have?

The larger the obstacle, the greater the potential for conflict.

Victoria Woodhull didn’t merely enter politics. She announced her intention to run for president at a time when women had no right to vote.

That creates an immediate dramatic question:

What happens when someone attempts the impossible?

For a storyteller, that is fertile territory.

The goal itself creates opposition. The culture resists it. Powerful people become threatened by it. The protagonist has to decide how much she is willing to sacrifice.

And that is where historical research becomes story structure.

Kirkus notes that Victoria’s campaign attracted powerful enemies, particularly after she publicly accused Henry Ward Beecher of adultery. The resulting scrutiny put her at risk of imprisonment.

This is another essential storytelling principle:

A protagonist’s goal becomes dramatically interesting when someone—or something—has a powerful reason to stop her.

Writers sometimes spend enormous amounts of time developing a protagonist’s backstory while overlooking the forces working against that character.

But conflict is what turns biography into narrative.

It would be easy to describe Victoria Woodhull simply as “the first woman to run for president.”

But that doesn’t tell us why we should care about her.

The more interesting question is:

What kind of woman would attempt something so improbable?

Danaher’s novel explores Victoria’s beliefs about marriage, sexuality, religion, women’s rights, money, and political power. Kirkus describes her as a far-seeing woman whose ideas about gender, religion, and happiness within marriage feel remarkably modern.

That’s where a historical figure becomes a character rather than a museum exhibit.

Writers should resist the temptation to make historical characters perfect heroes.

Contradictions are often more interesting than accomplishments.

A character who is brave but reckless, visionary but flawed, compassionate but difficult, or idealistic but capable of making disastrous choices can give a story far more life.

Great historical storytelling doesn’t make readers feel like they’re reading about “back then.”

It makes them feel as though they’re standing in the room.

That requires research, certainly—but also sensory detail, relationships, conflict, dialogue, and character choices.

Kirkus’s review highlights Danaher’s use of historical detail and her richly characterized cast, which includes figures such as Walt Whitman, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, Cornelius Vanderbilt, and Ulysses S. Grant.

Kate Danaher’s Unstoppable: The Victoria Woodhull Story is a reminder that history is filled with people whose stories are waiting to be rediscovered—and that the writer’s job is not simply to tell us what happened.

It is to make us care about the person it happened to.

Congratulations to Kate Danaher and Story Merchant Books on this important recognition from Kirkus Reviews.

 

What Happens When Harry Potter Meets Atlantis?

 

Knight School Shows Why Great Fantasy Begins with One Impossible Question

Every unforgettable story begins with a question that refuses to leave the writer alone.

What if Atlantis never disappeared?

What if becoming a knight required surviving school first?

And what if two ordinary teenagers were thrust into an ancient civilization where their greatest challenge wasn't just staying alive—but discovering who they were meant to become?

These are the kinds of "what ifs" that power Richard Lohrey's exciting new fantasy novel, Knight School (The Atlantis Wars, Book 1), now a #1 New Release in Teen & Young Adult Greek & Roman Myths & Legends.

The Power of an Irresistible Premise

Writers often spend years searching for the perfect premise. The strongest ones combine the familiar with the unexpected.

In Knight School, sheltered fourteen-year-old Jack Pepper receives an unusual birthday gift from his estranged grandmother: a mysterious nautilus shell. Instead of simply whispering ocean sounds, it delivers precise coordinates in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean.

Joined by his fearless new friend, Bowie Blackwood, Jack embarks on an adventure that transports them to medieval Atlantis—a kingdom where myths are history, danger lurks around every corner, and destiny has already chosen them.

Before they can fulfill that destiny, however, they must survive Strongthorne Academy, where becoming a knight involves far more than sword fighting. There are goblins, enemy armies, impossible lessons...and yes, even prom.

It's a premise that instantly sparks curiosity while creating endless opportunities for conflict, humor, and character growth.

Worldbuilding That Serves the Story

Many fantasy writers fall into the trap of building elaborate worlds without giving readers compelling characters to follow.

Lohrey avoids that pitfall by grounding his extraordinary setting through two relatable teenagers who experience Atlantis alongside the reader. Every magical discovery becomes personal because Jack and Bowie are discovering it for the first time themselves.

The result is immersive worldbuilding that enhances the emotional journey rather than overwhelming it.

Raising the Stakes

Great fantasy isn't simply about magic.

It's about transformation.

Jack begins as a sheltered teenager uncertain of his place in the world. His journey through Atlantis forces him to confront danger, responsibility, friendship, courage, and purpose.

External conflict becomes internal growth—a hallmark of memorable storytelling.

Whether your story takes place in medieval Atlantis or modern-day Manhattan, readers stay invested when characters evolve under pressure.

Lessons for Writers

Knight School reminds us of several timeless storytelling principles:

  • Start with a compelling "what if?"
  • Introduce ordinary characters into extraordinary circumstances.
  • Build a world that supports character growth.
  • Balance high-stakes adventure with humor and heart.
  • Make every obstacle reveal something new about your protagonist.

These principles work across every genre, from fantasy to thrillers to literary fiction.

Ready to Build Your Own Story World?

At Writers Lifeline, we believe every successful novel begins with a powerful premise, compelling characters, and a story structure that keeps readers turning pages.

Whether you're creating an epic fantasy, historical fiction, or contemporary novel, our editorial coaching and manuscript development services help writers transform promising ideas into publishable books.

Like Jack Pepper, every writer begins with a single invitation to adventure.

The question is: Where will yours take you?


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Knight School (The Atlantis Wars, Book 1) by Richard Lohre

 

A thrilling coming-of-age fantasy where two teenagers journey to medieval Atlantis, enroll in an elite knight academy, and discover that surviving school may be every bit as dangerous as surviving war.

Perfect for readers who love imaginative worldbuilding, mythological adventure, memorable friendships, and stories where courage is earned one challenge at a time.Legends aren’t born—they’re enrolled.

Legends aren’t born—they’re enrolled.

Sheltered teen Jack Pepper receives a nautilus shell from his estranged grandmother on his fourteenth birthday. When he holds it up to his ear, he’s given coordinates to the middle of the Atlantic Ocean along with a time and date in the near future. He embarks on the journey of a lifetime along with his new best friend Bowie Blackwood, a fearless, street-smart runaway.

A harrowing voyage combined with supernatural intervention transports the teens to medieval Atlantis. Upon their arrival, they are summarily captured and sentenced to death for espionage. They are pardoned by the mystic leader Master Lumens, who has been expecting them. They each have a higher purpose to fulfill, but first things first—a good education.

They are enrolled at Strongthorne Academy where they will learn to become knights if they can survive the four-year curriculum, goblins, enemy troops—and prom.

 

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TAP-DANCING ON THE RAZOR’S EDGE




If you’re an authorpreneur, a writer, an artist trying to make it in today’s toughly competitive global market, you’re tapdancing on the narrowest bridge in the world—spanning the cactus fields of the UNKNOWN world and THE PROMISED LAND where the grass is greener, and the trees are tall and mighty.

It’s the smallest and most dynamic and most important bridge in human experience—one that everyone would like to be standing on, but few have the courage to attempt:

It’s the bridge of VISION--that links dream with reality.

It’s a very small bridge and very narrow and uncomfortable when you first step onto it. But the longer you’re on it, the more maneuvering room you realize you have. The more comfortable it becomes standing on what you recognize as the razor’s edge.

You learn to tap dance.

You learn to laugh and cry again.

You learn to enjoy the dance, to sing while you dance.

You learn perspective. You build character. You turn from butterfly to lioness.

Sooner or later, you should begin to feel, as I do, incredibly fortunate to be doing what we love the most—storytelling—and getting paid to do it. As a producer, editor, literary manager, author consultant, and brand launcher, I get to be an alchemist, turning stories into gold.

And as someone who tries hard to always think OUTSIDE THE BOX—especially since the boxes either are crumbling or have already crumbled--it has been thrilling to see my clients’ DRACULA THE UNDEAD on page one of cnn.com and on the New York Times extended list—after I added a brand name to the mix; and to be producing my clients’ Jerry Blaine and Lisa McCubbin’s THE KENNEDY DETAIL, which appears from Gallery Books/Simon & Schuster after we found a way to get Clint Hill to write the forward, and we managed to set up, with our reality partner Renegade83 a 2-hour Discovery Sunday special which garnered an Emmy nomination. These clients danced the danced successfully, and because they, like all storytellers, are inveterate masochists are already back on that bridge dancing that crazy dance again.

No one is forcing you to do this. Remind yourself of that when the going gets toughest. You’ve chosen this career, and you can only lose at it if you quit.

What you are doing, in business terms, is creating the most valuable commodity on earth, “intellectual property.” And today that is worth more than real property! 

You are entering an infinite profession, of unlimited potential. Not even the sky is the limit—my client Nik Halik’s The Thrillionaire has been in outer space! In this world of studios crashing, networks retrenching, publishers conglomerating, where everything is changing all the time—at least one thing is constant: the need for stories never ceases.

“Trackers” are highly paid by the major studios to find stories and bring them in.

No wonder storytellers were considered sacred among the ancient Greeks--because they were the channelers of STORIES, stories that described reality in terms humans can relate to.

Therefore don’t let your ego prematurely destroy your career, as I have seen it do for so many writers. “No ego” should be your mantra, as you take your WORK, not YOURSELF, seriously.

Eventually, on that razor’s edge, you’ll learn that though the Promised Land IS worth the promise it’s the struggle to get there that is the most valuable experience of your life.

As storytellers who are here this weekend because you actively pursue your vision, you know full well how narrow the bridge we stand on is, how fragile. But you should also know that we’re heroes for even attempting to cross this bridge. 

I’d like read a tribute to your work by the greatest Greek poet since Homer and Sappho. His name was Constantine P. Cavafy, and he lived in Alexandria, Egypt, and died less than a hundred years ago:

The First Step


The young poet Evmenis
complained one day to Theocritus:
"I've been writing for two years now
and I've composed only one idyll.
It's my single completed work.
I see, sadly, that the ladder
of Poetry is tall, extremely tall;
and from this first step I'm standing on now
I'll never climb any higher."
Theocritus retorted: "Words like that
are improper, blasphemous.
Just to be on the first step
should make you happy and proud.
To have reached this point is no small achievement:
what you've done already is a wonderful thing.
Even this first step
is a long way above the ordinary world.
To stand on this step
you must be in your own right
a member of the city of ideas.
And it's a hard, unusual thing
to be enrolled as a citizen of that city.
Its councils are full of Legislators
no charlatan can fool.
To have reached this point is no small achievement:
what you've done already is a wonderful thing."

So let’s pause to celebrate--and applaud ourselves right now--for even being here today, on this step—whether it is your first, or whether you’ve taken a few steps already. If you are among the latter, you’ll appreciate the words of the great playwright-poet Samuel Beckett: “Do not come down the ladder. I have taken it away.”

Let’s also face it: you’re in “show BUSINESS,” as my client and partner Michael A. Simpson constantly reminds me; and you must deal with it as the BUSINESS of SHOW. What years have taught me is how important it is, never more so than today, to understand the BUSINESS of being a visionary, a person others call “mad” or “insane.” Remind them of Salvador Dali’s response: “The difference between myself and a madman is that I am not mad.”

I always say that the difference between a visionary and a con man in the creative world is SUCCESS. No one believes you can really do it, because everyone has told them how hard it is—and they themselves are too fearful to try.

Yes, it is difficult. That’s why, though everyone in the world has a story, NOT everyone—only YOU—are doing something about it.

Your personal cutting edge difference will be dealing with your career as a business on all fronts. Business requires a plan, an investment, a marketing program, and unceasing determination to move the flag across the field, remembering, for consolation, that if you die in the midst of your own dream that, by definition, has to be a happy death!

As Muriel Rukeyser said, for us humans, “the universe is made of stories, not of atoms.” Whatever it’s really made of, all that matters is how we perceive it. And it’s through stories that we form our perception.

When you’re standing on the razor’s edge in fear, or complaining—as all of us constantly do--remind yourself:

No one is FORCING you to tell your stories to the world. No one is holding this gun to your head but yourself.

You’re here by your free choice, while they are behind their counters or their commuting dashboards or their tellers’ windows because they are afraid to take the chances you are getting used to.

Meanwhile, you are following your dream.

Welcome to the world of storytellers:

What is a storyteller? A storyteller is a simply a communicative dreamer—a person who dares to learn how to communicate her dreams to all of us.

Doing so is not only his privilege, it’s his responsibility. I always told my Occidental College students, “If you have a dream, and fail to express it, you have denied all of us a unique vision that only you can bring us.”

But Aristotle said, “Excellence is not a plan.” Dreamers need to plan. An authorpreneur who truly wishes to succeed in the commercial world of storytelling needs to analyze it from a business point of view. AMBITION and VISION are NOT ENOUGH. You must equal them with CRAFT, TECHNIQUE, AND SKILL.

In my book, A WRITER’S TIME, I wrote that four things are needed to succeed in Hollywood:

1) Persistence (endurance, determination)

2) Contacts (networking)

3) Being a fun person to work with (and its corollary, “Staying off everyone’s life is too short list”) and

4) TALENT

It’s sobering to realize that any one of the first three are sufficient in themselves. Bad movies can be made through sheer persistence; mediocre books can be published just through strong contacts. But the 4th, the one we’re all looking and hoping for, is NOT sufficient. Talent alone must be combined with the others.

And add LUCK or GOOD TIMING and, remembering what someone said that the “harder I work the luckier I get.”

You might also add ORIGINALITY—which Joe Roth defined as “being able to think of something that hasn’t been on TV!”

Recently, trying to maintain the business of show business, my company has evolved. We raise independent financing for films, and encourage writers to become filmmakers to move their projects forward. We consult with writers on their career strategies one on one. We launch brands. As literary managers, we look for the next Sue Grafton or Robert Ludlum whose vision CLEARLY extends into the future.

What we learn from the tap-dance on the razor’s edge is:


TOUGHEN UP.

KEEP MOVING FORWARD DESPITE YOUR PRESENT MOODS. A week from now, you won’t even remember how you feel today; so don’t let it stop you from working. My wife Kayoko is always reminding me that Gandhi said, “Full effort is full success.”

PERSIST. NEVER GIVE UP. Yes, you may be going through hell. But “if you’re going through hell,” Winston Churchill advised, “keep going!”

NEVER PUT DEADLINES ON YOUR CAREER.

TAKE YOUR CAREER, NOT YOURSELF, SERIOUSLY. Don’t go from saying “I just want to be better” to “I just want to write what I want to write.” I’ve repeatedly seen clients lose the humble perspective created before success hit them, and sabotage their careers.

NEVER PUT ASIDE YOUR VISION, BUT PERFECT IT, PERFECT IT, PERFECT IT and make allies of those who can help you do that to bring your craft and skills to the level of your talent and ambition. If you continue pursuing your dream no matter what until you achieve it—and then you’ll have bigger dreams, of course—by definition, YOU CAN’T FAIL. Carlyle put it this way: “Success is steady progress toward a worthy goal.”

Walt Disney was turned down 302 times before he got financing for Disneyland.

Frank Herbert’s DUNE was rejected 36 times. Don’t let your representative give up at 32!

George Lucas was forced to put up his own money to pay for “Star Wars” because NO ONE believed in his vision. By the time the film came out, he was bankrupt. He is now fabulously wealthy of course—PRECISELY BECAUSE HE WAS UNABLE TO SELL ANY OF THE RIGHTS TO THE FILM OR ITS SEQUELS. Shakespeare played politics to get the Globe Theater built for his own plays. Sophocles and Aeschylus had to do the same thing in the time of classical Greece. Jane Austen, Thomas Hardy, in fact most late nineteenth century novelists began their careers SELF-PUBLISHING.

Jerzy Kosinski’s STEPS won awards, but was rejected by publishers 34 times—once by its very own publisher, after it had already been published.

Remember what William Goldman observed, in his Adventures in the Screen Trade: NOBODY KNOWS ANYTHING.

In today’s tough world of authorpreneurship, be flexible and always THINK OUTSIDE THE BOX.

Yes, the business of becoming and being a professional writer is hard. The hard part is the great part. That’s why you’ve chosen to do it. The river is wide between where we are now and the success and attention we want is on the other side. The razor’s edge is thin and dangerous. You don’t NEED to do this. You’re DESTINED to do this.

What could be a happier mission in life?

How can you fail at being yourself?

And now you know what the bridge is—a razor’s edge--and how to dance on it, just promise me and yourself that you won’t fall off.